Interim Crit and Responses
Interim Crit 1
Comments:
- Overall comments are average.
- Need to firmed up with the programmes
- Connection and responses with existing building need to be clear
- Structural study in detail is needed to avoid bulky looking column and visual connectivity.
- Locate major nodes to have better pedestrian flow.
MCO Crit (Internal)
Comments:
Dr. Zaky
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There seems to be nothing happening in the corridor. So the idea of life happens during a journey does not come out.
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It is good if you have some survey to support programme you have within the 'serpent'
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Try to treat your building as incidental space along a journey, people do not go to your building, but they do activities there when they are moving in a journey.
Dr. Wan
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Currently have 3 nodes where people oriented themselves but nothing happen in the corridors.
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Corridor as main design
Ar. Kalsom
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More understanding on my thesis project now, design the essence, the corridor. (Same comment as Dr. Zaky)
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Ar. Sofie
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Lack of contextual response, need more narration on it, previously has but gone now.
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Momentum of floor plan and 3D planning
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Blocks in diff area
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Need narration from diff users ( city user, local user, freelancer user, tourist user) , how dedicate to everyone
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Do more sectional study (linear sections)
My concerns and direction in response
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Confuse about grid line and structures
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Still will remain the central nodes with more fragmented parts on corridor.
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Will further develop on overall layout.
Interim Crit 2 (External)
Panel 1
1. approach not clear
2. have to study on acts & by-law about air space usage, DBKL
3. question about the real issue
Panel 2
1. what is the real issue and underlying theory?
2. missing continuity from abstract
3. not a complete design narrative
4. back track and prioritize on real issue
Conclusion & Response
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The presentation unable to deliver the full idea to the panels.
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Architecture vocabulary and the verbal presentation should be improved.
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Every decision of the design should be narrated with suitable method to express the complete image to the panels, complete verbal and visual presentation is needed.
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Should include performance criteria on first board